comment on Yeong Tyan’s coursework ‘08
link : http://melonfarmer.wordpress.com/2008/08/24/35-paintings-from-coursework-2008/#comment-54
Omg omg i love your work!!! especially all the girls they look so cute. I think the main character is really well designed and polished! Great job!
Also i think you have a few very good compositions here. I like the 4th,5th and 6th pages because you bring the viewer into a different perspective and angle of looking at things. The fourth page is very cool! Really brought out the feeling of loneliness and fear.
I also love the colours for the 6th picture, very vibrant and very delicate details which really made the picture very interesting
However i have a question! whys the girl sometimes in white? haha
the only thing im apprehensive about is that sometimes the composition gets a bit messy like the 7th piece.
Otherwise, great job! woohoo nice book:D and i think your book looks prettier in real than scanned anyway 
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comment on Yeong Tyan’s coursework ‘08
link : http://melonfarmer.wordpress.com/2008/08/24/35-paintings-from-coursework-2008/#comment-54
Omg omg i love your work!!! especially all the girls they look so cute. I think the main character is really well designed and polished! Great job!
Also i think you have a few very good compositions here. I like the 4th,5th and 6th pages because you bring the viewer into a different perspective and angle of looking at things. The fourth page is very cool! Really brought out the feeling of loneliness and fear.
I also love the colours for the 6th picture, very vibrant and very delicate details which really made the picture very interesting
However i have a question! whys the girl sometimes in white? haha
the only thing im apprehensive about is that sometimes the composition gets a bit messy like the 7th piece.
Otherwise, great job! woohoo nice book:D and i think your book looks prettier in real than scanned anyway